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Hey all,
I devised this during a writing class (the teacher was going over basic grammar). It's hard to believe that college students, somehow, don't know basic English grammar, let alone how to spell things correctly when they have a dictionary right next to them. I mean, I know I'm not perfect in that subject, but damn, atleast they could write a coherent sentence or two without using the word "like" seventy-two times, or spelling "architecture" as "arketechtor". Damned AIM and MSN kiddies with their "hay, i knw u!" >,>

Anyway, this method helps to micromanage parts of your story, to let you focus on the details a little more, and overall work out a better story. It starts with working out the main points, and slowly works down how to get from one to the next by smaller points between them. You'll need some organization outside of the chart idea to keep track of character details and such, but this should help with plot and storyline a bit.


To help analyze movies and stuff, you can use this concept. If you want practice with it, feel free to use me as a "teacher". We can pick a movie or book we both have access to, and work out the story line using one of these charts, so you can see how it works. That or I can even read over what you come up with using it, to give you some pointers.




And yes, I know I'm not following this for "Standing Alone" (my web comic). That's just me coming up with random jokes and stringing them together with a semi-serious action story that evolves as the jokes need it to.

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:iconmtusk:
Looks good. Might help me in the future. ;)

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Glad to be of service :)

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Per Dr. McNinja:
Man is only separated from Heaven by that which he will not ramp.
:iconwulfsbane:
Ahhh it all makes sense (and appear easier) with the charts :nod: Definitely a very handy tutorial cause as you know I sometimes have trouble forming story ideas for my characters (Dameon being one of them) but from this it looks like I could finally follow a stable guideline from the ground up. Is this the first of many storymaking tuts to come?

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Perhaps, depends on what random inspirations I have for story lines :P

I have a lot of knowledge on concepts (for both stories and art), from both analyzing them and being taught, but since I don't really execute them well I have a hard time figuring out what things people could use to make things easier :P



If I get inspired when I have time, I'll probably do another one on character design though. Might not necessarily be a "tutorial", but more of a listing of things to keep in mind, and a small walkthrough for one of my side characters or something.

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Per Dr. McNinja:
Man is only separated from Heaven by that which he will not ramp.
:icondelamer:
Thank you! that was an good explaination. Because I really do have a problem of getting all my ideas out and in a good and interesting order. I think this one here might help! :D

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Glad it could be of some use :)

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Per Dr. McNinja:
Man is only separated from Heaven by that which he will not ramp.
:iconangelibr:
loved that.. i'll try soon... but n my language! ;) and perhaps i'll get courage to translate, but i'll need help.. hehehe =p

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:iconfrostbain:
I might be able to help with that, but I haven't had much for foreign languages (2 years French, 1 year Spanish).


Glad you liked it :)

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Per Dr. McNinja:
Man is only separated from Heaven by that which he will not ramp.
:iconangelibr:
hahahah... i wanted to say I would try the idea in my language... the same method, but in another language... ;)

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:iconfrostbain:
I know :) I meant if you wanted help translating it afterwards :)

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Per Dr. McNinja:
Man is only separated from Heaven by that which he will not ramp.

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